Wednesday, December 31, 2008

సర్వం....శున్యం.


స్నేహాన్ని
నాకు పంచావు
ప్రేమని రుచి చూపించావు
కల్లోలం నాలో రేపావు
కడకు దరికి చేర్చేవో ?

నాలోని నాకు తెలుసు...

నా గమ్యం నువ్వు
నా గమనం నువ్వు
నిన్ను చేరాలని చేసే ప్రయత్నానికి దిక్సూచివి నువ్వు
నా బహుమతి నువ్వు

నా బలం నువ్వు
నా బలహీనత నువ్వు
నా లో సగం నువ్వు
కానీ నా సర్వం నువ్వు ..
జీవిని బ్రతికించే ఊపిరి నువ్వు.

ధైర్యం చేసి, ప్రియా అని పిలుద్దాం అంటే..
మనసు నన్ను ఆపింది
కళ్ళెం నాకు వేసింది

మనసులోని మాట చెబితే
నువ్వు నాకు దూరమైతే?
తలువలెను ఊసు....

కానీ...

ప్రేమని నేననుకొన్నాను...
చెలిమి అని నీవన్నావు..
సర్వం నీవనుకొన్నాను..
సూన్యం నాకు చూపావు..

ఇక
బ్రతుకను ఒక నిముషం
సాగాదింక
గమనం

ఎందుకిక నాకు ప్రపంచం?

14 comments:

Madhuri said...

hmm... may be this is one of the few faces of yours which are unknown to me! still i can see the same passion behind this piece!!

Alpine Path said...

Can you give an English translation for non-Telugu readers like me??

vissu said...

hmmm...its nice to know new things about people ..right? someone said, a person gets boring once you know him all. donno how true it is...
well thnxx for the comments...nd watch out there might more of me unknown!!

vissu said...

@ alpine path
hmm..a tough one...well i liked the feel in telugu..so went ahead with it. I can give u the same thing typed in english if u want...

Fangsz said...

Need a english version please.........i am an avid reader of ur blog... plzzz take care of poor souls like us

Madhuri said...

i have tried a English version, check the words before u post this...
[Enter Post Title Here]


Shared a friendliness,
Meant being a beloved,
With this raging passion,
Where would destiny take me to..!!

This is known only to the one within me…..

You are my destiny
You are my path
You are the moderator for my efforts in reaching you
You are a gift for me.(by lord)

You are my strength
You are my weakness
Although u r a part of me,
U r my soul mate
You are the breathe of this living

Had a desire to call you my dearest,
But it was my heart which pulled me back

I can not tolerate the moment of u parting away,
Knowing that my heart beats for you

Still….

I thought it was love
U thought it was attachment
I thought it was u and only u (for me)
But u left me in a vacuum…

Now that…

Its impossible to continue this journey of life (in ur absence)
I don’t wanna survive even a single minute…

Why do I need this world (without u)??

Unknown said...

Yeah Yeah Vissu,I totally agree with what you just said here..!!!!

If you wish, I can translate the WHOLE thing to you...!!!
let me know if you want..!!:)

vissu said...

@ vishu...
Thnxx bro.....next time i write i will make sure to cater to u too! i shall give u the english translation, but im afraid it would lose its sense.

vissu said...

@ parimal....
thnxxx bro....i always knew i taught u telugu perfectly!! yeahhh now u can tranlsate this poem to all the poor souls like vishu out there.....Vishu,contact pari.

vissu said...

@ madhuri....that was a brilliant effort there. If the poem was to be translated, this might be what i would have done. However, i see some words here and there which did not bring out the actual feel i had. On the whole, all the non-telugu readers out there, hope u get the gist from this...thanks again mady.

Alpine Path said...

@Madhuri, thanks a lot for your efforts!
@ Vissu, brilliant poetry(from what I understood from the translation). Kudos to the author and the translator :)

Anonymous said...

chas useless giveup saale gaadivi

Vasu said...

rei neeku ee talent kooda undani teliyadu.. good work. intaki. ninnu ala anyayam chesina ammay evaru.. Inta sweet n smark boy ni no anna. aa unlucky gal evaru??

vissu said...

@ vasu
Hmmm....been trying some odd stuff these days. Well this came out this way, there were more that didnt make it to public. lol!!
emi ledu ra....edoo alaa rayabudhhi vesi...try chesanu anthey kaani...nannu evaru anyayam cheyyaledu....idhi oka ooha matrame.
inkaaa....devadasu pose lo ki raledu ley....vastey rase paristithi undademo ley!!